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2023年4月24日北京市西城区初三一模英语如约而至！大家感觉怎么样？

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题目1：

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，询问中国的传统节日。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日，并说说你喜欢它的理由。

提示词语：traditional，show，get together，celebration

提示问题：

●What's your favorite traditional festival？Please describe it.你最喜欢的传统节日是什么?请描述一下。

●Why do you love it?你为什么喜欢它?

Dear Chris,

I'm glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.【首句已给出，请勿在答题卡上再写啦】

I hope the above is helpful.Please feel free to ask for more information.【尾句已给出，请勿在答题卡上再写啦】

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文【题目1】：

My favorite traditional festival is Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.我最喜欢的传统节日是端午节。它是在每年的农历五月初五。On that day, Chinese people usually hold lots of interesting celebrations.The Dragon boat race is the highlight, which truly is a combination of strength and beauty.在那一天，中国人通常举行许多有趣的庆祝活动。龙舟赛是其中的重头戏，这才是真正的力量与美丽的结合。And eating Zongzi, which is a kind of sticky rice dumpling, is a must during the Dragon Boat Festival.吃粽子，这是一种（粘性的）糯米团子，是端午节期间必须吃的。

The reason why I love the festival is not only the enjoyment it brings but also the deep meaning behind it.我喜欢这个节日的原因不仅仅是它带来的享受，还有它背后的深层含义。The festival is celebrated to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet and patriot. Celebrating the day also represents Chinese people's love for their country.人们庆祝这个节日是为了纪念伟大的诗人和爱国者屈原。庆祝这一天也代表了中国人对祖国的热爱。

独家参考范文1：

Dear Chris,

I'm glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.My favorite traditional festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival, which falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. It is also known as the Moon Festival because it is celebrated when the moon is at its fullest and brightest.我最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节，它在农历八月十五。它也被称为中秋节，因为它是在月亮最圆最亮的时候庆祝的。

On this day, families and friends get together to appreciate the full moon, eat mooncakes, and drink tea. Mooncakes are a traditional food during this festival, and they have different fillings, such as red bean paste, lotus seed paste, and salted egg yolks. Eating mooncakes and admiring the moon symbolize reunion and harmony.在这一天，家人和朋友聚在一起赏月，吃月饼，喝茶。月饼是中秋节的传统食物，它们有不同的馅料，如红豆沙、莲蓉和咸蛋黄。吃月饼和赏月象征着团圆和和谐。

I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because it is a time for people to show love and care for each other. It is a great opportunity for families to gather, eat delicious food, and enjoy each other's company. I also enjoy the beautiful scenery of the full moon and the lanterns that decorate the streets and homes. The festival has a warm and lively atmosphere, and it always leaves me with happy memories.我喜欢中秋节，因为这是人们互相表达爱和关心的时候。这是家人团聚的好机会，吃美味的食物，享受彼此的陪伴。我还欣赏满月的美景和装饰街道和家庭的灯笼。节日气氛热烈活泼，总是给我留下美好的回忆。

I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.

【Looking forward to hearing from you soon.】

Best regards,

Li Hua

独家参考范文2：

Dear Chris,

It's great to hear that you're interested in Chinese culture! When it comes to traditional festivals, there are so many to choose from. Personally, my favourite one is the Mid-Autumn Festival.听说你对中国文化感兴趣真是太好了!说到传统节日，有很多可供选择的。就我个人而言，我最喜欢的是中秋节。

The Mid-Autumn Festival is held on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, usually in September or October. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy the beauty of the full moon. People eat mooncakes, which are round pastries filled with sweet or savoury fillings, and children play with lanterns.中秋节是在农历八月十五日，通常在九月或十月。这是家人聚在一起，欣赏满月美景的时刻。人们吃月饼，这是一种圆形的糕点，里面有甜的或咸的馅料，孩子们玩灯笼。

I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because it's a wonderful opportunity to show gratitude for family and friends. It's also a celebration of harvest, which is an important part of Chinese culture. The beauty of the full moon reminds us of the vastness of the universe and our place in it. Plus, the taste of mooncakes is always a highlight!我喜欢中秋节，因为这是一个向家人和朋友表达感激之情的好机会。它也是庆祝丰收的节日，这是中国文化的重要组成部分。满月的美丽提醒我们宇宙的浩瀚和我们在其中的位置。此外，月饼的味道总是一个亮点!

I hope this gives you a good idea of one of the many traditional festivals in China. I'd love to hear about any festivals that are important in your culture as well!我希望这能让你对中国众多传统节日之一有一个很好的了解。我也想听听你们文化中重要的节日!

Best regards,

Li Hua

刘凯老师说：

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called Double Fifth Festival, is celebrated on May 5th on lunarcalendar. It is a folk festival widely spread with a history of over 2,000 years, and is one of the most important Chinese festivals as well. There are various celebrating activities on that day, among which the customs of eating rice dumplings and dragon boat racing are quite important.端午节，又称重五节，是在农历的五月五日。它是一个有着2000多年历史的民间节日，也是中国最重要的节日之一。这一天有各种庆祝活动，其中吃粽子和赛龙舟的习俗是相当重要的。

吃粽子 Eating Zongzi

Zongzi is a kind of food made with sticky rice（糯米）and is wrapped（包裹）withreed（芦苇）or bamboo（竹）leaves. It has different shapes and fillings（馅料）. In the northern part of China, people use red jujube（枣）as fillings. In the southern part of China, people use beans, fresh meat, or egg yolk（蛋黄）as fillings.

赛龙舟 Dragon Boat Racing

Dragon boat race is a traditional amusement activity in the Dragon Boat Festival.TheRaces are an indispensable part of the Dragon Boat Festival and are held all over China.

龙舟比赛是端午节的传统娱乐活动。是端午节不可缺少的一部分，在中国各地都有。

喝雄黄酒 Drinking realgar wine

Realgar wine is Chinese liquor seasoned with realgar. It is a custom to drink the wine during the Dragon Boat Festival.

雄黄酒是用雄黄调味的中国酒。端午节喝酒是一种习俗。

佩香囊 Wearing a sachet

The sachet, which is said to be able to ward off evil, is usually hung around the child's neck or tied to the front of his or her garment as an ornament.

据说能驱邪的香包通常要挂在孩子的脖子上或系在他的衣服前面作为装饰品。

悬艾叶菖蒲 hanging mugwort and calamus

Ai Tsao is a kind of medicinal herb that can cure diseases. It is inserted in the doorway on behalf of Zhaobaifu and can make the owner healthy.

艾草是一种可以治病的药草，插在门口代表招百福，可使主人身体健康。

吃咸鸭蛋 eating salted duck eggs

Tradition has it that it is good to eat salted duck eggs during the Dragon Boat Festival as the burning summer is coming. The salted duck eggs are nutrient-rich and have some effect on the treatment of heatstroke.

传统认为，在端午节吃咸鸭蛋有益健康，因为灼热的夏天很快就要来临了。咸鸭蛋营养丰富，对治疗中暑有一定功效。

刘凯老师整理：端午节词汇

1. Dragon Boat Festival 端午节

2. Dragon boat race 赛龙舟

3. Sticky rice 糯米

4. Wrapped in a piece of leaf / Wrapped in leaves 包在叶子里

5. Salty(美) / Savory(英/澳) 咸的

6. Egg yolk 蛋黄

7. patriotic poet 爱国诗人

8. To commemorate Qu Yuan 为了纪念屈原

9. Lunar calendar 农历

10. Keep up the tradition 保留传统

过往考试文章积累1：

Dear Maria,

I'm very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture,especially the festivals.Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival.The Dragon Boat Festival,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.

The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. It’s very popular.

The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.

And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.

Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!

Your friend

Li Hua

过往考试文章积累2：

Dear Peter,

I would like to extend a heartfelt invitation to you. Since the Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner, I sincerely invite you to my home to have a happy time together.

The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the major festivals in China. The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. For thousands of years, the festival has been marked by eating zongzi and racing dragon boats.

You have told me many times in your letters that you are fond of boating. Now I am sure that your dream will come true soon, because there will be a dragon boat race in my hometown during the Dragon Boat Festival.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

过往考试文章积累3：

Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us to cycle to the West Lake next Saturday for the Dragon Boat Festival.

The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the death of the famous ancient poet, Qu Yuan. There will be a variety of activities such as eating rice dumplings, throwing rice dumpling into the river and so on. We’ll also spend some fun time together watching the dragon boat race, which will make us experience Chinese traditional culture. We should be back around 6 o’clock in the afternoon.

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Wang Ming

题目2：

解决问题的能力是一项必备的生活技能。某英文网站正在开展以“Problem-solving”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述一次你成功解决问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获。

提示词语:nervous,friends,advise, talk

提示问题:

● What happened?

●What have you learnt from it?

We all face problems in our daily life.我们在日常生活中都会遇到问题。【首句已给出，请勿在答题卡上再写啦】

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